Developmental Editing

You’ve carried your story for a while: months, maybe years. That’s hard work. Now might be the time to let someone share the load so you can cross the finish line with confidence and flair.

A Bear Hug for Your Book

A developmental edit is often described as a big-picture, high-level or wide-angle view of your book. It’s definitely those, but I also like to think of the developmental edit I offer as a bear hug for your book: I wrap myself around it, hold it close, discover where it’s strong and where more support is needed. Then I provide that support.

A WordServings Developmental Edit examines

  • structure, organization and pacing
  • plot or argument arcs
  • character development and consistency
  • subplots and themes
  • openings and endings
  • voice and tone
  • clarity of ideas
  • likelihood of reader engagement.

Benefits by genre

  • Fiction. You receive insight on plot, pacing, characters, and whether your story meets genre expectations.
  • Memoir. You see how effectively your life events have been shaped into a compelling and relatable narrative.
  • Non-fiction. You learn how well your ideas are organized, how clear your argument is, and how to strengthen your authority.

What You’ll Receive

  • Your manuscript, liberally festooned with in-manuscript comments. Using Track Changes, I write clear notes, lots of them, where issues appear AND where things are going particularly well.
  • Extensive editorial letter detailing strengths, challenges and next steps, specific recommendations for revision priorities, a summary of next steps to guide your rewrite or polish.
  • Follow up call. Time to ask questions and discuss revisions.

Investment

  • Fiction starting at $0.04 per word (50,000 words x $0.04 = $2000.00)
  • Memoir – starting at $0.045 per word (50,000 words $0.045 = $2250.00)
  • Nonfiction – starting at $0.05 per word (50,000 words $0.05 = $2500.00)

A clear agreement covers scope and fee before any work begins, and there are never any hidden costs.

Ready to begin?

If a Developmental Edit seems like more than you want to commit to right now, consider the leaner Manuscript Assessment.